Moment « Bazm-e-Tasavurat

Moment

Let me cease to exist for a moment
so that I may see
what nonexistence is like

Let me cease exist for a moment
so that I may see
the disappearing act of life

Let me cease to exist for a moment
for when I have lived all my life
let me cease to live for a moment
so that I may see a moment die

- Raatkiranii (K.F.S)

on June 4, 2008 at 10:46 pm1 Paul

Very powerful. Very profound. This poem seems to capture my own thoughts and feelings at times.
on June 5, 2008 at 2:07 pm2 Raatkiranii (K.F.S)

Paul - Thank you for your appreciation. I’m glad the words reached you and triggered something familiar.
on June 5, 2008 at 8:24 pm3 Zios

Wow!…beautiful thought!
on June 5, 2008 at 8:44 pm4 Raatkiranii (K.F.S)

Zios - Thank you for your kind comments. I’m glad you dropped by.
on June 8, 2008 at 3:41 pm5 1poet4man

Indeed, and wise to how what disappears remains forever a constant…now…
on June 8, 2008 at 4:06 pm6 Raatkiranii (K.F.S)

1poet4man - “what disappears remains forever a constant…now…”
Very true. Thank you for dropping by and commenting. Much appreciated.