Photograph by tonypraxis
falling slowly
the light weight of rain
drifting slowly
the heavy fragrance of rain
slowly
slowly
…it rains
- Kaosar
June 13, 2008
Slow Rain
Posted by Kaosar (Raatkiranii) under Poetry, Rain, Ramblings, Random, Writing | Tags: drifting, Falling, Fragrance, heavy, Light, Poetry, Rain, slow rain, slowly, Writing |[7] Comments
June 13, 2008 at 11:19 pm
Very nice poem, thank-you for sharing.
June 13, 2008 at 11:34 pm
Your poems are addictive
…again very nice !.
June 14, 2008 at 9:41 am
Trevas Walker – It’s my pleasure, and thank you for appreciating it.
Zios – Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed it.
June 18, 2008 at 5:17 am
Very nice! light as the tiny drops of rain …
you write brilliantly!
aur la saqya!
keep it pouring!
June 18, 2008 at 1:11 pm
Aadil – Thank you, and i’ll try my best
July 1, 2008 at 5:38 pm
A wondeful poem
reminds me of a place and time….
you’ve always had a way with words to make oneself ponder
July 4, 2008 at 11:17 am
Alan – Hey it’s great to hear from you, and thank you i’m glad you enjoyed it.