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Tonight

July 7, 2008 by Kaosar (Raatkiranii)

Photograph by flimseflo

I hear your sounds tonight
in this deep dark night
the little little dancing
the loud loud noise

I see your sights tonight
in this deep dark night
the bright bright flashing
the hard hard strike

“angry night”
they say tonight
but I know you’re about…
dancing and flashing
loud and bright
snickering and smiling
all in pure delight

and I know you
I feel you
for I was just so not long before
so will this night away
thunder and lightning
will it your way
swing it to your beat
sing it to your tune
it’s your night tonight
do with it as you choose

- Kaosar (Raatkiranii)

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6 Responses to “Tonight”

on July 9, 2008 at 7:58 am1 Paul

I like it! It’s not only a pleasure to read, but it strikes me as very creatively done.
on July 9, 2008 at 12:24 pm2 Raatkiranii (K.F.S.)

Paul - Thank you, I appreciate your feedback. Everything I write is special to me in someway, but I must say this one was a joy to write, and I too enjoy reading it.
on July 11, 2008 at 6:49 am3 Amina

that was very moving…i will keep on checking for more of you

regards from poland
Amina
on July 11, 2008 at 8:55 pm4 Raatkiranii (K.F.S.)

Amina - Thank you, I’m glad you felt so, and drop by as often as you like.
on July 15, 2008 at 5:40 am5 Aadil

‘A pure delight’ it was! Lovely!
on July 15, 2008 at 4:19 pm6 Raatkiranii (K.F.S.)

Aadil - Thank you, for your kind comments. Much appreciated.