tell me, whisper it…
does the sunlight steal you from your listless half-sleep,
running it’s rays down your face
does the light steal from you your half dreams –
in and out of sleep
does the sunlight awaken you into reality or just another waking dream?
- Kaosar
June 17, 2009 at 6:01 am
Thats lovely! A nice depiction of the sun-rays, full of action. It certainly is deep with a profound metaphor.
A good one!
June 20, 2009 at 1:16 am
Love this… almost mocking our own knowledge… very clever and creative. I smiled at your intuitions, your knowing… I feel the sunlight was definitely smiling… Great work
June 23, 2009 at 12:07 pm
Aadil, thank you. It’s good to hear from you.
June 23, 2009 at 12:10 pm
Enreal, yes, the sunlight is most certainly a being in itself here. I’m glad you saw that.